let me be fragile
oh let me be a flower;
let me be delicate and full of color
i shall be a flower
i will have the petals of life
and to guard this fragility
i will have rigid, cut throat edges
that will help me survive life
let me be fragile
oh let me be a flower;
let me be delicate and full of color
i shall be a flower
i will have the petals of life
and to guard this fragility
i will have rigid, cut throat edges
that will help me survive life
Well written!
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thank you ๐ i am glad you like it ๐
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Beautiful
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thank you ๐
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You’re welcome!
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Lovely poem, I like it.
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thank you ๐
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You are welcome
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So lovely and true๐
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thank you so much ๐ โค
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Hey liked this one. Short and beautiful. Iโm from India . Donโt know why I mentioned that. But still, you write well. May you achieve your dreams.
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Aww thank you hi i am from Pakistan lots of love ๐ i am literally smiling like crazy rite now haha but still thank you ๐
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Amazing
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Thank you so much ๐
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A beautiful poem with a beautiful meaning. Short, but right on point.
Hope to read more poetry from you. ๐
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Thank you ๐ so much
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Nice poem. Fragile and cut-throat, these two words depicts how life shapes us. And you have used them perfectly in your poem. Our serenity is always challenged by the events that eventually make us a bit harsh. That is necessary to survive. It is not always that we have to take guard behind our own feelings, though it is necessary to keep that fragility secure because it somehow represents who we truly are. This is what I think about the life and what I felt like sharing after reading your poem.
Keep writing ๐
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thank you Deepak for your compliment and yes you completely understand what i tried to convey through my work and thank you again, cheers! well i quite admire your thoughts about life, one’s thinking differentiates oneself from others.
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You are welcome.
Yes, that is true. It is what we learn and how we think makes us different from others, and even different from who we were before. Eventually, we have to live with ourselves and as we evolve we find a lot about ourselves.
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true we are evolving day by day it’s upto us if we want to change for good or for bad ๐ thinking matters
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Yes it does. It matters the most ๐
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Short and sweet
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thank you!
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